All Comments on 'Neighbor's Obsession - 01'

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Ellienora35Ellienora35almost 2 years ago

Interesting premise. I'd love to see another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Moreeee plsss

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Part 2 please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I am glad it is a fantasy because in real life there are just so many flaws in his plan if she doesn’t fall in love.

missliteroticamissliteroticaalmost 2 years ago

So hot!!! I loved it! Hope there's more to come

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

5 ... 5 ....5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well, this was creepy as fuck.

annabellebritoannabellebritoalmost 2 years ago

Simple premise, but it's effectively written. Well structured and presented. The latex panties were a good addition. Very creative. The struggle was well written, you know how to write. The sex was hot and very visceral. Great job, Camden's idea is pretty original...well for me. Let's see what happens. Great story!

AlienLadyAlienLadyalmost 2 years ago

Amazing I love his gentle forcefulness. That kind of emotional control in a Dom is 🔥🔥🔥

bratattackbratattackalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback!! More will come soon (yes, double entendre intended 😂)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is so fuckin hot! Omg my ultimate dirty fantasy right here like you picked it right out of my head. Please keep the story going

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Such an easy 5 rating!! And I could not agree more with annabellbrito's opinion above. She stole my thunder and more beautifully than I could ever phrase it! Yes, more please!

bratattackbratattackalmost 2 years agoAuthor

To people who keep commenting to complain that this is rape, keep in mind that this is the nonconsent category. I’m going to delete any comments that serve no other purpose but to point this out

julianmarquezjulianmarquezalmost 2 years ago

It's entertaining how effortlessly insane he is. Hot sex scene too.

timrivtimrivalmost 2 years ago

Soon as she is able, she hits him with a frying pan, calls the cops, he serve’s ten to twenty, she gets rid of any potential offspring and becomes a guest on Jerry Springer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

part 2 ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It’s so funny how people come to reluctance/non-consensual category, read a story and call it rape. That’s the whole point! I hope the author doesn’t get discouraged by such dumb assholes. Good work!

P.S This is my favorite type of non-consensual story. The hero is hot and possessive, heroine is sweet and yet resilient.

Best part: He doesn’t have to slut shame her to come!

SoLongNThanksSoLongNThanksover 1 year ago

Fantastic writing and story. Really looking forward to a completed story. Please finish!

wiseoldsage321wiseoldsage321over 1 year ago

I want to see how to she submits

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is amazing! Please write more!!!!

Oh_la_laOh_la_la12 months ago

So hot! Would love a part 2

Watch4pleasureWatch4pleasure11 months ago

Amazing...my head is spinning with so much desire

BaztrachianBaztrachian3 months ago

Damn. Great story!

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