by bratattack
I am glad it is a fantasy because in real life there are just so many flaws in his plan if she doesn’t fall in love.
Simple premise, but it's effectively written. Well structured and presented. The latex panties were a good addition. Very creative. The struggle was well written, you know how to write. The sex was hot and very visceral. Great job, Camden's idea is pretty original...well for me. Let's see what happens. Great story!
Amazing I love his gentle forcefulness. That kind of emotional control in a Dom is 🔥🔥🔥
Thanks for the feedback!! More will come soon (yes, double entendre intended 😂)
This is so fuckin hot! Omg my ultimate dirty fantasy right here like you picked it right out of my head. Please keep the story going
Such an easy 5 rating!! And I could not agree more with annabellbrito's opinion above. She stole my thunder and more beautifully than I could ever phrase it! Yes, more please!
To people who keep commenting to complain that this is rape, keep in mind that this is the nonconsent category. I’m going to delete any comments that serve no other purpose but to point this out
Soon as she is able, she hits him with a frying pan, calls the cops, he serve’s ten to twenty, she gets rid of any potential offspring and becomes a guest on Jerry Springer.
It’s so funny how people come to reluctance/non-consensual category, read a story and call it rape. That’s the whole point! I hope the author doesn’t get discouraged by such dumb assholes. Good work!
P.S This is my favorite type of non-consensual story. The hero is hot and possessive, heroine is sweet and yet resilient.
Best part: He doesn’t have to slut shame her to come!
Fantastic writing and story. Really looking forward to a completed story. Please finish!