All Comments on 'Neighbourly Differences Ch. 04'

What a poor story with no love and respect at all

Pure male fantasy. Any resemblance between this story and reality is entirely coincidental.

5/5 keep up the work. I love the sex between bill and emily

Hell yes!!! I hope she ends up pregnant by this old man. It’s always hot thinking about someone else’s girlfriend get knocked up by an another dude. Please don’t wait so long for next chapter.

:) Ok so last chapter poor virgin Emily almost got raped and this was like a wake-up call for both of them..now this chapter, 5 pages later..wtf happened :)) she became a complete whore, the sex toy of their older despicable ugly fat big-dicked neighbor...read that already, same story, boring....i was hoping things would evolve differently. I would stop this series and just start a new one

Unfortunately the story lost all interest once it was clear that Tom was going to remain just being a sad jerk off. That his whole sexual experience with her was being jerked off while listening to her stories was fine up to the point it became clear to all that she had gone further with others. Sadly, from then on you just can't emphasise with him. She's never going to happy with him and there is no real future, he's ceased being a love interest and is now merely an object in her games ... and an increasingly unnecessary one too.

Women have the brain of an oyster.

Congratulations.

With a little work, you can upgrade her to the intelligence of a jellyfish.

Ahh Emily is hooked now and getting a free ticket to motherhood soon.. Ol' Tom just needs to take charge and take that pussy his way.

Great story. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see Emily give in to Bill's desires.

Fucking amazing ! Can't wait for the next one

I can't wait to see Emily beg Bill to cum inside her unprotected pussy. She needs it so bad. Bill is the dominant male. It's his right to cum inside the pussy he owns, and Emily knows it too. I love the no sex for Tom angle. Emily's pussy is for Bill only. Can't wait for the next chapter

Another cuck story heading into geezer porn.

You should have finished the story in the first, or at most in the second chapter, now it's one more of many stories of cuckolds and slutty couples, that is to say, your story went to shit.

I can't give you more than one star, especially for the lousy female character you created, is she a girl, or a caracaol?

Thank you for her ditching the birth control pills and love where this is now heading.

This has been the sharpest downturn in a story I have read yet. It sacrificed all seduction and list for poor plot and viability. Very sad to see what once had great potential now become this

What an amazing story... Looking forward for the next chapter.

Back on track! Much better than ch 4. Let Bill have as much of her as he wants and please keep up this excellent work!

Loved this chapter. Will our love birds let little Tom watch some real fucking in the next one? Hope they will. And Emily should be more generous in praising Bill for his tool and prowess. After all he is her conqueror.

You’ve created some great characters with this series just love the way Bill is degrading her more and more. Especially enjoyed it when Emily lapped up the homeless mans cum from the glass....a great touch! Hope there’s much more to come and Bill can get Emily doing even more degrading acts with both himself and others...thanks and please keep it going.

Lovely work. Really picked up again after chapter 3. Can't wait for the next part!!

this chapter was amazing . Better than last one . Please more role for asha .

Way better than the last chapter! Please phase out the rapist completely. The story is back on a good track. The pace is quite high, but it fits to the story. I'm really looking forward to the next part.

Better story than Chapter 3. She can't keep Tom guessing, if she is going to keep fucking Bill, it's time to literally start rubbing Tom's face in it

So awesome! I love where this is going!

Asha needs to try bills dick

Horrible. I loathe Emily. The story sucks too.

Can’t wait for her to fuck Bill with no protection.

Bill needs to find a way to seduce asha now

Best chapter without a doubt! I really like the public aspect especially the homeless guy who’s cum Emily drank. I would like to see more public stuff with more dirty men joining in maybe Emily giving blowjobs and letting them finger her. I love how Bill is making her dump her birth control and would love to see Emily beg him to make her pregnant

I love the direction the last page took and her flushing the pills. I'm excited for the pregnancy play to really ramp up now.

Can’t wait for part 5

great story

continue please !!

Sigh, this series started out really hot, with a somewhat plausible story line and a good slow build up of the sexual encounters. The clichés were a bit on the heavy side but that is ok in this type of story and the writing was good.

After they had sex the first time things took a turn for the worse. I would have preferred to let it happen with Tom watching, but that is just my preference.

What has made me a whole lot less interested is that from being a curious but cautious young woman having new sides of her sexuality awakened she has now turned into a brainless bimbo hooked on a big cock. The logic behind her dropping the pills is absent as is her actions and the sudden change in their female neighbor. The same is the case with Tom, who suddenly turned into a timid cuckold with limited capacity for rational thinking.

Where this is going I have little interest in following, but thumbs up for good writing.

she is catholic shy girl, never show pussy to her bf, then suddenly dumb slut, nice writing ability, poor development of the story lines

she agree with her bf rules then become cheating slut, and Then ready to get pregnant, really !!!!!!

The only good thing going about the series was part-1, should have continued the teasing and exhibitionism a bit more. Didn’t like the transition to a cheating slut and sort of a cuckold. The story had potential, but now its ruined

Next installment soon I hope!

Please update us will chapter 5 arrive or are you Done i love the series!

This is stupid how it goes from her doin it for her boyfriend to this he should at least get a back bone and fuck asha dam ain't no man I know will go for this and why dude dick got to be 13 inch she s virgin so this was a waste of time

This story started out good then you just went side ways wit it first what's the use of bringing up asha she should start fuckin tom or Emily 2 what wit the rape shit that didn't make no since and how a Catholic girl finna get married don't let her boyfriend fuck gets involved wit bill that fast cause she see his dick that's 13in that's stupid

If he had a 13in dick he should have a gang of sluts then if she fell so easily this don't make no since a waste of time but you could put a story together you just did things to early insteady of a 13in dick you should of went 9 and you should of let asha turn her on to some lesbian shit that would of been better so why bring her into the story

More! Get more depraved! Share her around! More!

I am hooked - and need more. Seems I am as addicted as Emily. Wonder how far this will go and what if Asha is not a playslut of Bill too. Wouldn't really surprise me and would make it even hotter.

Thanks for writing and sharing your wicked depraved story with us.

Hugs and kisses

It's starting to become an Emily + Bill story. I liked it much more when it was a Tom and Emily in love story with a twist. The contempt she is starting to show towards her boyfriend really bothers me.

If I would proceed with this story I would join Emily and Tom again, make it more of a love with benefits. Tom goes way too off on humiliation for my tasting and Emily going behind his back really bothers me. There are no references to the love and the strong bond between them anymore.

If this continues I am off, there might be a lot of guys wanting her to submit as a worthless whore, I am not one of them. It started as a love story and it should go back to being a love story.

Wondering if we'll ever get chapter 5.

guys, I am craving such fine stories on the same themes. Please help me with recommendations

Chapter 5 please!!

Well I see Emily as being madly in love with Bill. She keeps trying to deny herself. I think the sooner give into the fact that her and Bill belong together, the happier they will both be.

What marraige? Two college roommates playing a cuckold-hotwife game, teasing and opening up their marraige for lust without consequences. Thrillseekers breaking all the rules. What are they studying for?

Ironic. If the shoe were on the other foot, would Emily be as tolerant with Asha and Tom exploring their sexual infidelities? Could the newlyweds last long enough to graduate college? Who will bring up Bill's child?

Whens part 5 coming?

Chapter 5 is ready from 6 months ago in his Parton account !!!!!!

Hot as! Fantastic raunchy tale. Hope more comes soon

Ok. It's just a fantasy, a fairytale to avid readers jerk off. But the plot is so impossible that bothers me reading the story without thinking I am dumber than I thought, even if the sex scenes are well writen and pleasant to read. Her boyfriend Tom, who she lives with, doesn't get any, even after he sees her taking another man's cock???? There's a chapter 6 on patreon since june 2023. It costs around USD 25 a month to see another chapter since then. It sucks!

I have read these 4 chapters multiple times. I would love for this story to continue.

Are you ever going to post chpt 5 here. It was posted on Pateron on June 15. You haven't updated Pateron since Sept. Have you retired??

The element of her maintaining her virginity with her boyfriend lost any plausibility long ago.

Great story. Love the anticipation.

I hope the author's ok, but the story hasn't been updated for months, and someone else pointed out his Patreon account isn't being updated either.

He is still alive but i think he stopped writing stories

We sure hope that you haven't let the naysayers stop you from writing. We would love to see the rest of this series and anything else you may be working on.