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by Chicago440

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samantha647samantha647about 5 years ago
amazing!

very erotic story .. love the long slow buildup .. so naughty !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Not Bad

Some misspellings add the point of view shifting was very distracting. I see this is your first story here. I suggest getting with an editor to flesh things out. I see potential in you. Good story as well.

2 stars

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I've traveled the world and experienced many things and people. I'm grateful to Literotica for giving me an outlet to share some of these experiences. Writing helps me come to terms with my ongoing personal struggle between my own inner good and evil, and connects with people ...