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All Comments on 'Never Steal From Your Boss'

by mrmark83

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Bad writing and grammar ruin the story

Parts of it were ok and kind of sexy but the grammar, typos, and misspelling kind of ruined it.

mrmark83mrmark83over 5 years agoAuthor
Interesting Comment

I appreciate your comment Anonymous, I pride myself on doing all those things correctly and can't seem to see where you have found those errors.

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

Stupid dialog and narration.

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