All Comments on 'New Boobs on Show'

Too many things wrong with this one. With a boob job, she wouldn't have gone down from a 38 any size cup, to a 36 bigger size cup. And, with ANY surgery, a chlorinated pool would have been off limits for a month, or more. Sorry.

There's potential here but you really need to proofread before publishing. James became Jacob, there were numerous typos and misspellings, nearly from the first word (cooped not couped). And most of all you're not Cormac McCarthy and do need to use quotation marks. The dialogue was very unclear. Aside from the technical flaws the story was decently hot despite being quite short. Clean up the writing and flesh out the story and I think you've got good potential.

What a hot sexy wIfe! Reminds me of my Mandy. I sure miss her great body and sexiness. I don't miss that she gave me crabs twice tho. Great writing, Great Story, Great Effort, Too bad hubby left, he could have watched all the other 4 guys bang his wife too. That kind of thing would get me upset to miss! LOL Too bad he left, too bad the wife didn't realize he left and quit screwing around. 5 stars. Thanks, Buster2U

Kinda OK story but difficult to read

I am no expert but a 38 size measures around the back and across breast. The c or dd is cup size as in breast size. I can see her going from b to dd but not down from 38 to 36 unless she lost weight or muscle in the back.

Mmmmm strange to drive to a pool to get out of the house on a rainy day. Usually a pool say is a warm sunny day.

The breast size thing appears off. Cup size I see changing (letter) but the size of the bra measurement (number) would remain the same as it goes around the chest, right? The difference between that 38 number on chest to the number you get when measuring around the breast is the cup, right?

The guy goes from wanting to see her tease to allowing the full on sex is crazy. If he didn't want it he could have stopped right away regardless of who was in the pool, Then to leave her alone all that time? He asked for it so now he is a wuss and she will continue. Has nothing to do with new tits.

Quotation marks are NOT optional. Easy rating of 1.

A shocker…absolute rubbish

Another whimp husband 🖕

Thankyou for your comments taken on board as a new writer

Lesson learnt dont write when drunk sorry

How does increasing cup size reduce chest circumference?