All Comments on 'New Job, New Secret Pt. 02'

by cb4321

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
What the hell?

This totally changes story plot and people all at once in the middle of the story. Not good. It leaves me confused and not understanding what is going on. Either something got left out or someone isn't paying attention to their writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nicely done

Nice mix of first time bdsm and the real world

I liked the way she felt the first time experience

the story line is great

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Garbage

And NEVER switch categories.

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jus bored tbh. also forgive me if my writing is a bit hard to read, I’m kinda new at this:)

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