All Comments on 'New Kingdom: American Court Ch. 10'

i love this story!!!!!! keep up the awesome work

Not sure I particularly like this chapter, will wait to see what the next one is like and see if I like that one better. Post soon please up till this chapter I was loving the story although disappointed that Alena wasn't completely changed and bringing babies into the story didn't please me to much but that is just me.

First you point out that the babies can't produce their own blood then in the next paragraph you say they produce blood that is dangerous to vamps. So which is it?

looking forward to much more

the plain blood is being entered into their system and taken out like a dialysis machine would do they aren't producing blood silly; the people who were using the babies were using them to make the blood stronger by running it through their

Loveed this chapter mickay! cant wait for the next :)

One of the best yet. Keep up the good work!

please just let gabrial go , well on the warpath , he sounds like he needs to really kick some one ass hard

So if the bad guys were pumping blood through the bubs, to harvest the poison blood using the modified dialysis machine then now that the good guys have them shouldn't they be able to take them of the dialysis machine and just use an IV to feed them blood since they have no wish to harvest the contaminated blood.

Willie

its been awhile I've read every chapter so far but I forget why are they called the first creation does that mean the first vampires?

Great story! I will eagerly watch for more!

Hi!! I'm really loving this story but I'm confused! Chapter 11 doesn't seem to match up with what's happening with chapter 10. I've only read maybe 10 lines in chapter 11, so I may be wrong...please help!