All Comments on 'New Life Surprise'

Long, long story. Well written and obvious that lots of work went it to it.

Suzi - she leapt from the page and had two personalities, dominant with everyone except Marv and Trent.

Aimee - confused, horny, vulnerable. relatable.

Trent - a lapdog. only does what Marv says. Marv is a bit of a predator. Any chance of a Chapter Two?

Chapter 2 where Aimee joins the next soiree.

How did Aimee or Ingrid not end up preggers? That'll be a big surprise for them!