All Comments on 'New Neighbour's Fantasy'

Okay, that was excellent.

I was a little nervous: it was so well organized, by such an expert sexologist, I feared the excitement of spontaneity would be gone. Instead, the story emphasized the communication, then gave us hot descriptions of the action, and just enough salacious-flavored love that... that I love these characters! This was great!

Nothing like watching your love one getting fucked over and over.

Loved it

Anna

This is my first story I read from you. I must say it deals with a lot of action within a short story. Nice description of events, however I find character development is lacking. Character development is SO IMPORTANT if you want the reader to get really immersed into an erotic get together. This story would fit nicely as a chapter into a longer story. All in all, I did enjoy it and will read another one to get a better picture of your style of writing. I have you on my favourites list. ;)

Amazing story as usual Toni.

Love the detail…it really took me there.