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by girlswannahavefun

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I guess nothing is off limits.

Childhood memories ruined.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Don't give up your day job.

haltwhogoestherehaltwhogoestherealmost 2 years ago

Interesting, fun premise. However this needed a lot of work to untangle the jumble of words from the frequent pov shifts.

SirBurnInsideSirBurnInsidealmost 2 years ago

Greatly enjoyed your little story, very fun and sexy! I certainly won't ever see the Scooby Gang in the same way again! Haha

girlswannahavefungirlswannahavefunalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@haltwhogoesthere Thanks for your comment. I will try to solve the issues. English is not my native language. So this can be the reason why there are jumbles in words.

girlswannahavefungirlswannahavefunalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@SirBurnInside Thanks a lot! I detected some mistakes in the narrative flow, grammar, etc... :) The story will go on, and I hope the next ones will be better than this.

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Hello to all of you! You can call me Xena. If you like a woman enjoying writing stories that are quite explicit and erotic, I am here! Also, I can draw erotic pictures for you! Take your seatbelts. I want you to enjoy and have fun.