All Comments on 'New to the Road Pt. 01'

Premise with potential.

But just an introduction.

C'mon, 38D breasts? Why necessary? And what does 38 mean to you, it's chest size, not breast size?

TITS is how they're sprlled, not TITTS.

And you wrote "...or you can except your role..." You meant ACCEPT, not EXCEPT.

You need an editor/proofreader.

Three stars.

Great Start to a great road trip!

With the intrigue you laid out here I hope you have some more ready to go.

I would say it deserves a second chapter. More actually