by theaquarianpen
maintain or have control, shit happens. TK U MLJ LV NV
i am not responsible i drank to much. Why? Why go off with him? Why not scream being embarassed is less than being raped? Why not press rape charges, he fucked her should could have any number of diseases? Totally stupid scene all the way thru. I would have divorced my wife if she had put herself in that situation! Time to grow up and accept full responsibility for your own actions. A woman can not be seduced if she doesnt allow it to happen.
The husband over hears this; " Rob said he is going to bang that one at the next party." As he said it I saw Jules walking by...
and the husband says or does nothing ?
Please everyone,both this writer and the reviewers: take time to spell words correctly. If something is excessive, it is "too" something, not "to" and "were" and "where" are not interchangeable. Moreover, commas are helpful in many places, including where a list is given: "eating, working, designing, ..."
the next line. It was all fairly unrealistic and lame, but it
is a genuine attempt and I give it 3 stars.
He seems to care about her, yet he does nothing to protect her? He knows that they do not belong to this clique, yet he shows no caution when socializing with them? All of his concern is after the fact. This is a rape crime, assuming it happened as the wife described.
Can the husband really believe the wife? Only the writer can know that. The old saying "No smoke without fire" is brought to mind.
Just who the hell is JULY??
Try looking up a list of female names if you cannot spell, then "copy and paste" if you cannot type.
The name is JULIE.
hey randy, did you write this story? oh you didn't, hmmm then who died and left you God, and decide the names of people in other authors stories? If you don't have anything nice to say then shut the hell up! thanks.
...cucks. And Randy, have you taken a look at the spelling of names in this culture of late? And where did you figure out how the author is pronouncing it.?
Holy hell, please Google the term 'run-on sentence.' The story had merit in general, but reading it was like navigating an overgrown jungle of bad grammar. Keep writing, but PLEASE edit your future contributions
I have known many women named for months of the year - one of my girlfriends was named January. It is quite possible for a woman to be named July. Glad to see the strong woman and strong husband - and the jerk getting his just reward.
"I know this a-hole is after my girl so lets go to this party and I'll get plastered so I can't help her and get her half drunk so she'll be easier for him cause I'm an idiot and have no balls."
Yeah that's sarcasm if you couldn't tell.
Husband should have kicked the shit out of him without wife knowing about it.
I love the way it came to a head and then they got back at him in a round about way that cost him his home and family in the end. A great story, when do we see another?
Johnny