All Comments on 'Nick and Khloe'

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chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Great Storyline Great Storytelling*****

Nice and hot complete story. Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story, more editing recommended

Fantastic pacing, storyline and characters. More editing is needed, there are militant grammarians everywhere, definitely including Literotica. Great first submission.

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