All Comments on 'Nick and Liz's Big Journey Ch. 01'

you need an editor and spell check....also take notes you misuse wrong names and

improper pronouns that or your just an awful speller....

Whilst there are certainly areas for improvement (spelling, grammar, both of which would be sharpened if you took the time to read through the document a couple of times - and maybe passed it around for feedback - before posting), it held my attention and I'll definitely check out the next instalment.

Its a great story but the only thing is the spelling errors. Otherwise, bravo!