All Comments on 'Nicole Gets Blackmailed Ch. 01'

good story keep going

What a shame. You could have made so much of this story.

There's more chapters to come...

Good start. 5 stars rating isn’t working for some reason.

The "daddy" instead of "Master" ruins the relationship dialogue. If she is a slave, then he should be called Master. The man is not calling her "daughter", or is he? See what I mean? Now the way money is tracked it is unlikely you will not be tracked and investigated for a million dollar deposit. Another thing, the bluff can be called by the woman letting this man know that a nobody like him cannot answer questions about how he came to know her details . Furthermore, the people who abused her will find out about him and want the "money" they will expect him to have acquired. Otherwise, refreshingly good.