All Comments on 'Niece'

This one I just couldn't get through I see this as a neice muscling in on her aunts marriage and the husband being forced to accept that his wife is a cheating whore who can't say no so he caves to keep the love of his life happy got to the end of the second page when I had to stop.... cheating is one thing when the relationship is broken but to have a character force themselves into a relationship that's just fine isn't okay... comes across as too real because it does actually happen and it's usually very messy in reality.... this story is just not suited to my tastes and I don't like to see relationships that are fine being twisted like this... in reality the neice would have been sent home or thrown out going by the base you provided to understand the characters of the aunt and the mc the uncle the relationship with the neice and this random guy is very forced and doesn't seem to fit with how the story started