All Comments on 'Niece's Wedding Pt. 02'

by ao1701e

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tzzzrtzzzrover 1 year ago

Great story, looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nicely done. Try to sort out your tense switches.

TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthorover 1 year ago

I see a mom getting hers in the future... Excellent story, great pacing.

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