All Comments on 'Night Lights'

There is a lot of this sort of stuff that women write. That is, about pain and being dominated by men. I've read that this is something of a fantasy for women, which, I think, is why I have rather a hard time with it. I don't read it because I'm not a fan of pain nor of hurting people. But that's just me.

So, other than that the story was well written, but you might want to work on your grammar a little, there were a few spots that were just a little bumpy.

Regardless of what I say, keep writing, this is just my opinion and I think you've got talent, so keep the pen to paper, so to speak!

Sorry about the anonymous, but this is so slow, I have no intentions of sitting here all night waiting for it to get past the email address.