All Comments on 'Night of the Himbo Ch. 01'

An intriguing start to the story. I’m interested to see where it goes.

I think I know where this is sort of going. An interesting idea. I look forward to more of Mike's story.

Interesting start with plenty scope for part 2.

Strong start!

It's an extremely well-written story with a hot-to-trot opening. Terrific dialogue enhances the relationship between Mike and Alice, But it's not clear where the story is going. Mike's transformation from a deal in the water aging male to a fresh and energetic male of the twentieth century. is a super twist that makes him more interesting as he peers into the near future. Will Zuzu reappear, will Alice become an object of Mie's desire and will this entertaining duo clarify their intentions?

Felix, thanks. Every once in a while, you come across a piece that has a real energy and directness and "feel" to it that tells you "this person can write." I feel that here. You're good. Very good. Please continue.

good but left hanging