All Comments on 'Night out'

Telling this story out of order makes it disjointed. Like who the hell are Coby and Travis? Why are they both ok with dancing with others and getting hard with them instead of dancing with each other? Odd as fuck. What is Bassir alluding to when he talks of an incident where Tyrell cheated. That seems to be hanging over them in this chapter and cast a dark cloud on their talk. It also infers that Tyrell’s infidelity is the impetus behind him being more exploratory with gay sex and more submissive to Bassir. But I would have preferred to read this in the sequence that it all happened. There was also casual mention of Tyrell still killing/shooting people like it was nothing which seems very unlikely that Bassir would tie himself to that. And lastly, where the hell is Romero? He’s not mentioned at all in any of these short out of order stories. He’s like what 4 yrs old so who’s watching him when they spontaneously head out to the club?!