by Kileka
What can i say, I really like it that you made a Silent Hill story and i hope your third one are as good as your other 2 ones. :)
Keep it up! I like this story a lot as I did the first one!
Please give us another chapter. I liked the way you described what happened to Alessa and how the main character reacts. The peep hole thing was creepy, but it fits so well with the story. Great job and keep writing!
I was VERY confused by the way U switched from 'Harry' 2 'Alessa' partway thru the paragraph after the sub-title: 'Harry'! I OWN a copy of the film, so less narrative & MORE sex, please. Thank You. otw, good diction & grammar. Tx 4 tales Kileka. More pleas. I'd like 2 see 'Alessa' get it on with the Silent Hill version of herself 2. I mean: she's darned HOT, no matter WHAT her personal view is!