All Comments on 'Nina's Night Visitor Ch. 05'

This is not a stand-alone story; it is necessary to read the previous chapters to really appreciate this one. A wonderful atmosphere of romantic love pervades this chapter, but the inconsistent and incomplete use of capitalization by the author is somewhat distracting, but the quality of the writing and the overall story line does continue an excellent romance. Five stars.

Thank you to the previous commenter. I submitted the wrong draft to Lit and am amazed it was published with all the capitalization errors. I will be resubmitting a revised version. Sorry about the errors and thank you for the kind words.