All Comments on 'Nine Wonderful Women Ch. 01'

Well quite a different on, a lot of thought seems to have been put into this story

A sweet coming-of-age memoir, told with clarity and a nice sense of candor. I like the affection and respect the author shows to the two young women.

Reasonably enough, the emphasis is on the women's actions in the bedroom. I'm feeling, though, that I'd like to learn a little more about them as persons.

Looking forwards to reading some more chapters.

I'll second Peter Cleveland's comments. Adding some reflections on how things changed in 24 years to result in a divorce would be interesting. Well written. I'll read the rest, too.