All Comments on 'No Ordinary Game Ch. 08'

Very erotic series until this chapter. This ending did not have a satisfying conclusion. It seems like TR lost his thread or just ran out of steam. Only two stars ⭐️ for this one, unfortunately.

I’m afraid this marriage is in trouble. No good can come from the path this couple is going down. Maybe TR can still save this shipwreck of a marriage.

I believe conflict is the key to any good story.

We can hope that Sy and Mandy are going to have their "and they lived happily ever after", but we get invested in these characters because of who they are and what they experience on their journey. Why would we care about them if they didn't face turmoil or suffer from indecision? Why bother reading or writing about Sy and Amanda if everything is fine and dandy from beginning to end?

It's the conflict that keeps our interest and makes us care about Sy and Amanda, and there's definitely conflict--- and them some--- for the lead characters.

Do I hope Sy and Amanda get their happy ending? Yes! Do I hope their marriage falls apart, and Mandy leaves her husband for her older boss? No... but, just like in life, not every story has a happy ending.

And that's why I appreciate what these characters are going through... conflict!

MORE..........DON'T STOP NOW

I have to say I expected more conflict over Sy fucking Tiffany. Like I said when it happens it was quite a twist an Amanda was adamant in earlier chapters that she couldn’t handle Sy with another woman. Interesting web that’s developing with others finding out. There’s only so many fingers to plug holes in the dam

Really great writing but the relationship between the players is out of whack.