by deepinleftfield
Figures the sister was fucking the dad too. Was hoping it wasn't going to turn into a group thing
I guessed right. Kate has been fucking their parents. And others. I love what you've done and I love where you seem to be taking it. I very much look forward to more. 5/5 stars.
Dewey Cheatham
I was hoping that’s where you were going with this! I love it. Please keep going.
This is a very enjoyable story so far, one of the best I have read on Literotica. There are a few minor typos, but I never would have guessed that it is your first story if you had not said that it was. I am looking forward to the next chapter. 5/5
Proofread before you post. Your single biggest problem is the random paragraph breaks in the middle of sentences.
I just noticed that with the sentence breaks here and there. I write and proofread in Word, and then paste it in here. I assumed that the formatting would be the same, but thank you for pointing that out. Just one more thing I need to keep an eye on moving forward.
Not sure. It says pending now on my dashboard, so it hasn't been approved yet. Maybe it shows up in the series before it is actually approved? I'd give it a day or two and try it again.
Very very nice...sister and mom, in a week's time...
One chapter left, wonder what mom meant by her comment...???
Five**5**Stars!!!!!💥💥💥💥💥
Stevie needs to have some one-on-one with his mom and just fuck the shit out of her.