All Comments on 'No Show Ch. 02'

I pity the snowflake who doesn’t know the beast they have awakened.

Too bad that plane of leftists coming back from the Wildcat game did not crash and rid the Crowbar Universe of Dr. Lionel Carmela, the University President Jerry Moore, the University President's wife, Hunter Stenson, and the other odious lefties that flew out to the Bulldog vs. Wildcat game.

I would have thought Melina Allgood might have found a hidden place she could easily escape from without a trace, to shine a laser pointer into the eyes of the pilots while they landed the plane.

Anonymous/plane crash - is that happened, I’d have much less to write about for the next (Earth-Crowbar) year.

GrandpaM - re: your comment at the end of No Show Ch.01- no, I did not have the Eagles Super Bowl in mind in writing the story of the Wildcats-Bulldogs game, just general bad if not dirty officiating. And more fresh material for stories. The game I wrote about followed Georgia Tech @ Georgia in 2006, and I used it to have the line “in my office it’s Fifteen to Twelve”

1thaiguy - don’t let the door hit you in the ass on the way out.

Great “Clean-up on Aisle 6” tale. All the IC high points were touched.

A request: I, and maybe many others, would love to read more of the time that Laura and Paulina spent together at the lake cabin during the Big Game.

And not just the fun and games!…😎

rick

Was this story only two chapters?

Yes. It’s only 2 chapters (of 7 and 8 pages respectively :-o ) The “Finis” at the end did mean this one is done. The next one should be out in the next few days if I get my rear in gear and get ‘er done…

HMMM . I forgot to click and finish this chapter . RIP Lange .

Been a while . That's why I checked here . I'm sure chapter 3 is on the way .

Man . It's hard enough , not commenting politically Crowbar . But some of those comments . I bit a hole through my tongue . Lol .

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*****Damn good read. Thanks for sharing.