by GirlintheMoon
This is building nicely. Good writing, good dialogue, good story line. Keep it going.
Thank you for sharing
Little tough to sell the dynamic of Tyler allowing Sam to join in knowing the history with Claire and Alexis' relationship with her...5*
Ahhhhhhh!!! That second pg was a trick!!!!!! Gahhhhhhh!!! I was so excited! And then bam.. see you next time… 😩 sooooo not cool!!! I need to find out more!
Oh, this is gonna be good.
Chances of poopy things not hitting the fan: zero percent.
Take your time..until it feels right .
The 'bite' between Liam and Claire needs
to play itself out. NOT suddenly disappear.
Liam and Claire are straight-up naughty. I’m afraid Claire is fixing to step on her dick, so to speak.
If the group crosses the Navajo Nation, I hope they can avoid Skinwalkers. Nasty, those.
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Sugar Magnolia, blossoms blooming
Heads all empty and I don't care
Saw my baby down by the river
Knew she'd have to come up soon for air
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Sweet blossom, come on under the willow
We can have high times if you'll abide
We can discover the wonders of nature
Rolling in the rushes down by the riverside
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She's got everything delightful
She's got everything I need
Takes the wheel when I'm seeing double
Pays my ticket when I speed
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She comes skimming through rays of violet
She can wade in a drop of dew
She don't come and I don't follow
Waits backstage while I sing to you
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She can dance a Cajun rhythm
Jump like a Willys in four wheel drive
She's a summer love in the spring, fall and winter
She can make happy any man alive — Sugar Magnolia — Grateful Dead