All Comments on 'No Vanilla Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

You are creating well rounded characters. What I never understand is the all or nothing boring frigid wife or slutty whore dynamic. At the end what he told himself was good. What he had just said to her about how it would be did not sound enticing. Honest maybe but incomplete.

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