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Click hereThe header on the faded, light blue paper said 'From the desk of... Commander Donald Troy'. Still legible was a handwritten note, which said:
Dear Ian,
Deuteronomy 32:35
Love, Dad
"That's Dad." said Jim, nodding, tears in his eyes.
"Even then, he knew." said Ian, tears in his own eyes. "I'm sure of it."
"And you've fulfilled your destiny, and gotten your vengeance." Jim said.
"What's Deuteronomy 32:35?" asked Susie.
The brothers recited their father's favorite Bible verse together:
"Vengeance is Mine, and retribution. In due time their foot will slip; For the day of their calamity is near, And the impending things are hastening upon them."
Finis.
- COMMENTS
Whitewaterbum8 months agoIC has a family and friends who will make their destiny part of history. Great story!!
Ravey19about 2 years agoAnother great story. I can understand why Don and Cindy react when everything is stacking up against them and I suppose the illegal actions of the swamp frogs and their henchpersons?? especially FBI agents allow some justification for the reactions of Don and Cindy but it still leaves a little bit of a bad taste in one's mouth.
Still puzzled about Betty Morelli and I hope she gets some justice. I got the impression though that Cindy was involved with her death but to me it seemed more an action of either the swamp frogs or even the next Mr Big, possibly the same entity. Loved the analogy to Eipstein's death??
WifeWatchmanover 3 years agoAuthorThe newest story in the ongoing saga has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.
Anonymousover 3 years agothe previous comment scared me as it said series end. at 83 I knowlosses do happen but am thankful I will be able to enjoy you some more
WifeWatchmanover 3 years agoAuthorThe next story is in progress. There have been some delays due to external factors, but I'll get it submitted soon. Thanks for your patience.
Anonymousover 3 years agoYour story are great, your writing is excellent. So sorry for the end of the series!!!!
I hope you submit more stories in the future.
GREAT!!!! GREAT!!!! GREAT!!!!
Anonymousover 3 years agoI NOTICED COMMAS AFTER ALL OTHER STORIES BUT - NO WAY OUT - HAS A PERIOD AT THE END !!!!!!!
Anonymousover 3 years agoJonesing for my Crowbar fix. I know this is an erotic literature site and the incestuous nature of one of his early stories is what started me reading his stories, but now I am hooked and don't care if there is sex or not. The writing is that damn good.
Anonymousover 3 years agoAwesome chapter. I have followed each chapter from the original Todd and Melinda (which I was not too comfortable about due to the content). I took a week or two in early 2020 to read that series. BUT from then on I was hooked, reading avidly until I caught up to the author. Then waiting eagerly until the next chapter came out. Now I am waiting for what seem to be an age. Could it be “Finis” at the end of this chapter is indeed finis of the series. Surely not.......... The swamp frogs have regained the Presidency (in real life), must be fodder for more work.... Some many loose ends.... so many possible story lines. Let this be but a pause.
