All Comments on 'Noah's Starship Ch. 16'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice progression

Navid and Noah are so good together. I love seeing their story progress and deepen. It was good to see Noah feeling free to express his displeasure and confront Navid with his complaint honestly and clearly.

May all good things be in store for these tender lovers!

Ab

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

beautiful as always

keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

As always, enjoyable and well written from start to end. I love these two!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
lovely

It keeps getting better and better, de writing is amazing and enages from the start to end.....when dis story started I wasn't sure about de relationship u two had...but am glad I gave it a chance.....am always happy wen I see an update.....thank you. ...happy holiday.....can I be olive twist.....I want to know how u guys celebrated the holidays.....PJ

WickedlittlemeWickedlittlemeover 7 years ago
Keep writing!

I always look forward to an update from you, on all of your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

I feel sorry for all those who gave up on dis story from de beginning......I know it was a bit different from de normal relationship we are use to...but it's turning out to be a beautiful relationship, like I always say normal is boring.

..am so happy I gave it a chance.......am always looking forward to seeing an update...thank you for not giving up on dis story because of the initial reaction u got from some readers.....thank u

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