All Comments on 'Noble Beasts Ch. 01'

by OvidtheLesser

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Spelling ? Really the editors accepted this?

FreedomBaseFreedomBaseabout 1 month ago

Wow ! I've never come across a story written like this. The writer has an incredible use of the English language ~ along with an insight into women's motives ~ and uses the lingo-lango to give me (a man) a look into the depths of where female desire comes from. Then there's the story itself: it's the "while the cat's away . . . . " story. Who would have thought there was THAT much depth to a common saying ? I'm impressed no end.

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I prefer to mix my creative writing with my porn, like they did in the old days

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