All Comments on 'Not Gay, Butt... Ch. 05'

admit your are writing gay for a gay audience with a woman thrown in as a diversion. A number of the Anal writers on Literotica try to hide under Anal rather than Gay.

I like a fine tale of MM FM FF weekend sex with couples. This one satisfied me greatly. I wish others who have personal objections to MM sex would just stop their whining and read some straight FM porn and be done with it. Sacanaz has broader horizons.

Thought that your series was very told and enjoyable. I can't understand why you have a few whining readers who have been warned of the subject matter but read it the whinge! There is a saying in these parts that if you can't catch fish, cut bait; if you can't cut bait get out of the boat!

the language you used in this story was a bit hackneyed..it felt like I was reading the script to a bad (well was there any other) 70's porno. I liked the ideas you had, I just felt some work on the execution was needed. So keep writing!!