All Comments on 'Not Just Another Blood Bag Ch. 02'

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cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 16 years ago
I liked it but I was expecting

a little more substance this chapter. Chapter 1 was a good setup and intriguing but nothing happened this time, except for setting up the Sydney and Mark possible relationship. In my opinion, this could all have been part of the first chapter so that you could introduce some new information. Hopefully Chapter 3 will be a bit meatier.

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