All Comments on 'Not Like Other Men Pt. 01'

Hi Jayne, loved reading this first chapter of how the boss stalked his dominant claim on you (Jayne?) and how you submitted so easily to his every request with barely a question in your mind.

Looking forward to see where this goes.

Wiz

It's a thumbs up from me :)

Thoroughly intoxicating writing - and incredibly sensual.

An extraordinary ending too. I'm sure I couldn't have Lance's will power to leave you alone....ha ha

XXX

An enticing beginning to a series that promises to rise to the heights of erotic pleasure. However I think that the chemistry between you and Lance is much more subtle than you suggest and that his assumption of dominance is only possible because you have signalled your willingness to submit to his pleasure through your modest responses. The way he left you at the end only heightened the level of latent arousal of course meaning that the eventual climax would be explosively intense.

Lovely story, Jayne. Appreciate your imagination and incredible attention to detail. Thank you x

Imaginative, unique and thoroughly entertaining exploration of an exhibitionist streak. Very well done Jayne!

Absolute magic!