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"So, those are my terms and a summation of my thoughts and feelings on the subject and how my response is based entirely upon your decisions. Marriage is an equal partnership. So, I'm ready to hear your thoughts and feelings and the result will be t ultimately decide whether this partnership is retained or dissolved. The floor is yours."
- COMMENTS
trucker19657 days agoDetails matter. We're told the husband leaves work early and is puzzled by his wife's car being in the garage when she should be at work. The a few paragraphs later at the hospital we're told she's a stay at home mother. Later at the lawyer's office the point is made again she doesn't work outside the home. again details matter.
Anonymous16 days agoThe idiot has a talk (Confrontation) with his cheating wife but hasn't asked her anything at all about what or why she cheated or for how long...nothing. The writer is so inept at portraying a realistic scenario of such a devastating betrayal that it borders on the ridiculous. The husband, a total wimp, by the way, displays a ho hum non emotional attitude. Yeah, that's realistic. This is just terrible writing, period.
Cookiecreamy4 months agoFunny, same old story, but you have a nice style of writing. A few flaws. In the beginning, she was not at work, for some reason. Then, later, she is a stay at home mom. You can't be both. And Tom's wife changed names on page 1. I like your stories. If you want an editor to proof read, send me an email. I'll be glad to help.
Anonymous5 months agoI stopped reading when she was caught, unknowingly, by her husband with his best friend having sex & the husband did nothing. Then when she calls her best friend, allegedly, going out of the room for her & her husband to see them- friend + his wife, at the teacher's conference. I read nothing where he was taken to the hospital, but maybe I skipped that. Either way, 2 stars. Stupid-assed story about a wimp of a man, or so it seems. And a 2nd chapter? Just no. Bob
mattenw6 months agoSorry, but no normal man reacts like that. The best friend and wife have been cheating on him for a long time and the best friend even wants her to leave him to be with him. And all he has to say in response is family dinners? How stupid!
If a man can forgive such cheating, then he should go to the nearest psychologist as soon as possible!
Anonymous8 months agoThis comment is on the first section. I agree with the commenter below that it is slow, boring, tiresome to read, and remarkable for the number of names for coffee that. the author managed to work in It is also gappy and some of the verbiage that was not necessary could have been used to fill in some of the gaps.
Anonymous10 months agoDon't think he's going to have to worry for much longer. Quite sure his heart will blow up from all the caffeine that he's consumed in the story. Guess it's a physical for authors to write a strong main character.
skruff10111 months agoSo he is eyewitness to her cheating and after eventually coming back home his immediate response is to make reservations at their favourite Italian restaurant, my god he certainly showed her he was not going to pull any punches, scorched earth is just around the corner.
Nitpicabout 1 year agoDragged out,this crap could have been written in far fewer words.Without reading Ch 2,he should dump the slut,otherwise she gets away with having several shags go unpunished,which she apparently enjoyed.As for Tom he should meet with an accident,to pay for his illicit pleasure.
Anonymousover 1 year agoThere are only three places in the known universe where the word and concept "cuckold" flows forth from the thinking mind: online gamers insulting each other, in jerk-off fiction and on LW comments. I can understand the first two, but I'm amazed by the the cuck-obsessed fucklechucks here-- they are damaged, either clinically or mentally, to be so obsessed. A cat looks at everything in terms of prey and predator. LW commenters break the totality of their existence into cuck/non-cuck. How do they cope?
Drgwngover 1 year agoHow can he refuse to be a cuck when he already is one? How can he demand fidelity when she has already tossed that aside? This was completely idiotic. Does the writer even understand the definition of English words? The dialog is abysmal. Lowest possible rating.
fredbrownover 1 year agoDon't understand the guy, all talk and no action - so far. Won't rate Ch. 01
Ch. 02 maybe?
