by ohmss
Good premise, and story location has some potential. But male exhibitionism is a definite turn-off.
lot's of fun! Great pacing and tease, with good narrative. I'd like to see more of this story type.
Thank you for the feedback! I will continue the story abs try to improve.
If I may ask, is the issue with male exhibitionism an issue with the story or a personal preference? I just want to understand is all. Thanks for taking the time to read!
I loved this “nudists’ dream” of a brave new world. The world would be so much calmer and peaceful if we had this mindset. (Could have gone without the restroom pee and skat business, though!)
loved it, the toilet stuff not so much but the general nudity went quite well with the story as a whole
Look man I really liked it, but I wish you have more of description to females especially Fiona. I’d prefer if you did take it a bit back with the males tho, and as for the toilet stuff, excellent, I’d actually like it if you dwell more into it. Only suggestions more hairy pussys more milfs and more incest.
A very interesting concept. Visited a mall like this in southern France. No attendants though. Lots of naked folks, but no action that I saw.