All Comments on 'Nude on the River'

Wow, a surprise ending.

A wonderful afternoon delight & this is your first story, well done!

I hope it's the start of your imagination blooming here.

Nice story. Great descriptive writing. And yes, a surprise ending. Keep it up.

I strongly recommend you pick a tense and stick with it. Jumping from past to present tense and back is jarring to the reader.

You better hope the Loving Wives crowd doesn’t find this story. You’d be crucified. Actually, the fact that she was married threw a complete new, and in my opinion, unwelcome spin to the story. It could have been a fun, spontaneous tryst but turned into a cheating story.

Nice story, to a point. That point being the 'furry legs' What a turn-off.

Sexy story. Reminiscent of clothing optional Deep Creek Hot Springs above a river in the high desert area of S. Calif. A two mile hike down to the springs and river. It’s not particularly private. On a hot summer day there might be 10-20 people there. And sexual activity does happen. Which to us is all very natural.

I saw that one coming! But still a great story, well written. I noticed the quality of writing in the first sentence. Keep 'em coming.

There’s little more exciting or inspiring than when a woman asks, orders you, “Fuck me.”

This is really high quality writing, with joy and a beautiful erotic edge. Please write more!

Good story. I think the ending would have been better if they were actually married to each other, and the whole stranger meet was a role play. Instead of him ending sad like a one night stand. He could make a reply to her ring reveal:

"Oh..." I stammer, staring at the river. "You know me so well."

Then end with possible plans for other locations or what they might do when they get home.

Very well written though spoiled a little by the switch in tenses. Stick to past tense and it becomes a better read.