All Comments on 'Nurturing Cindy 01: Introduction'

Has potential. Very short with vague information on the characters (especially your titled character) present or past. There's not very much to make reader feel connected to characters.

The only thing that would make me possibly look for Chapter 2 is the last question and answer she asked/answered. Good little cliffhanger but only if next chapter is ready to come out in next day or two.

Good luck.

Nicely packaged humorous adaption of a well trodden theme. Only complaint, if you could call it that, is that if you're going to use character names, please get the spelling right. It's Lapidus not Lepidus and Urkel not Urkle.

Cute fun little more info. 4 from me.