All Comments on 'Nye's Desires: My First'

Great job! I felt like I was there!

I liked the story - it was kinda sexy, kinda cute. Felt real - so that's a turn on.

friendship ? I'd say looks different.

college ? people with IQ of those two ? well now I understand the problems in the country.

manners? seems sex is like handshaking. no problem who it is , where , why, nothing special. to bad!

Good first time story. Well done and I'm looking forward to more.

Hi, Francis, Yes, things do get by those spell checkers such as moister for moisture and others. That did not distract me from your adventure. I hope you will develop other stories for us. Like this one, actual happenings can be very interesting. Hugs to you, Joe

All it needs is a few key words like cheerleader, big cock... to complete the scene.

Spelling be damned! I liked it a great deal:-) Rather reminds me of a wonderful interlude I had my first semester with a girl in my dorm. (A vivid enough reminder to make my shorts a bit cramped.) Lovely! Keep on writing.

Great job.. well written.. made me feel like I was there watching...