All Comments on 'Nymphocom Ch. 01'

A great fantasy. The story makes one think, "If Only."

A good concept that has the look of someone has done their homework when researching for this story.

I hope to read more of this good mind freak, it would seem the main character has to test his equipment to see how powerful it is by dominating a woman.

Thanks for the fun read.

A good foundation gives this story the edge. Can't wait for the next chapter

Good story

This is NOT an illustrated story!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This could be pretty good, but you've put this in the illustrated category and it isn't. Just because you've labeled chapter 4, or whatever, illustrated does not mean the whold story is illustrated. You should pull this off literotica, find someone good with a camera and some models, produce some illustrations to fit the situations in the story, edit them in into the appropriate sections, and re-submit this.

Great story - a very fun read, especially with English not your first language! Can’t wait to read the rest of the chapters! It’s also fun to read a French perspective!