All Comments on 'Obedience'

hoooooooooo boy i am gonna show this to my Dom tonight!! great writing and i can't wait to see more!

This was a sensational story, well written and inspiring. The end was so unpredictable and I think this makes the whole story even better. Great job!!

Lovely tale well told. It would have been fun if he would have teased her about people watching. Let her wonder are they alone or is someone watching. Excellent. Thank you.