by TheSoaringCrow
So far, I like this a lot! The build up and anticipation and the daydreams he has about his Mum... Great Stuff!
I liked it but where is this going ?? There's no incest!! Are you going to add to this story!!!!!!!!!! Gave it a 4 !!!!!!!!!!
Same Anon commented 4 times in 4 months, funny and persistent. Had to edit out the dot dot dots and it was only one short page. More like a synopsis than a story.