All Comments on 'Obsessed Ch. 01 - A Hard Time'

by TheSoaringCrow

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Fett75Fett7512 months ago

So far, I like this a lot! The build up and anticipation and the daydreams he has about his Mum... Great Stuff!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

A good start. I can't wait for more!

dirtysondirtyson12 months ago

Let him daydream of her with a big belly and bigger milky tits!

Frankie1952Frankie195212 months ago

Very enjoyable story so far, eager to read more to see what happens.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I liked it but where is this going ?? There's no incest!! Are you going to add to this story!!!!!!!!!! Gave it a 4 !!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Just average so far no incest yet waiting to read more 3 stars

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Hate these short chapters 2 stars

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Not much to it 3 stars

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Just a 3 there's no incest

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Just a 3 no incest

RanDog025RanDog0255 months ago

Same Anon commented 4 times in 4 months, funny and persistent. Had to edit out the dot dot dots and it was only one short page. More like a synopsis than a story.

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Hello there! I am super excited to take the plunge back into writing erotica/erotic fan fiction. I haven't written the like since I was in high school over a decade ago, so please forgive me if my stories seem amateur at this time. I am a big fan, and supporter, of erotica, ma...

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