All Comments on 'Occupational Hypnotherapy'

Very basic. Left in some typos, such as the secretary calling the main character "Mr. Crawford." Very repetitive verbiage used often, which became pretty dull to read.

Content itself was just okay, but could definitely improve with effort.

Nice story I've read, I only thought there should be more chapters to read. Just one is a little short :-).

The negative parts in my opinion are the long text about the description of the doctor. The client desciption is okay.

I know you just post it, so go on, I will wating for follow-ups.