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- Oceanna Blue
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"Blink!" Sam gasped, as the big creature slowed. "I think the egg hatched!"
The cave lit up like a disco ball.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI'm kinda sad that there aren't more scenes with Blink and Sam interacting.
mharrisonover 2 years agoVery different but thoroughly enjoyable :)
Many thanks for sharing with us...
BriteStudioMKMover 2 years agoThis was definitely a very different type of story from you. Certainly not bad by any stretch and the couple was very unique and interesting to see interact.
The beginning after she woke up from the crash could really do with a heavy rewrite. I personally found it very difficult to get through to the point where Sam started to interact with Blink because the pace of it just crawled along.
Not that I think her setting up her little haven was a bad idea to write but it could have been done in a much snappier, more engaging manner.
Still, a good job overall. If you expand this for a pay-for version, my only suggestions would be to tighten up the early pacing and give us a lot more of Blink and Sam getting to know one another
