All Comments on 'Octo Pie'

It was fast moving and fun

Loved the language you used. But of course... wasn't there an event that caused everyone to leave the area? Or is my memory THAT horrible

Keep it up! (and while you're at it, how about a chapter 2 to your slimeworm story!)

Can't decide if it's cephlodick or octosclong. Wonderful story.

As others before me have said, you have a brilliant literary style that kept me amused from start to finish. Witty and well written.

Please keep up the great work. I love your stories. I look for your work weekly and am overjoyed every time I find a new one. You going yo work on the insect one some more?

The octopi babies are nursing? With their beaks? Ok, tentacle rape, ok forced implantation of eggs, I'm on board. But yes I'm bugged by the non mammallian babies nursing. Maybe it's just that I'm currently nursing a 5 month old and he can hurt with his toothless gums. Octopus beaks?!

I'm only half serious, I did enjoy the story, very entertaining!

This was one of the most entertaining stories I've read so far. I clicked on the title because it was funny and I was not disappointed. There were octopuns everywhere and I loved it :)