All Comments on 'Odd Job'

Oh... that was a very nice vignette indeed. I could easily see myself between these two.

Great start to a series.

great story

I see this is your first story, and I think you have something going on here. However, this site is littered with parts of stories that are never finished, leaving readers frustrated and sometimes, mad as hell. ALWAYS post multi-part stories with the titles of 1,2,3 etc, i.e. Odd Job, Ch 1. Then post the last as "Odd Job, End". Using "Chapter 1" at the beginning of the story and "to be continued" at the end of each part is also a positive as then the reader knows more is coming. The same goes for "The End" to conclude your story. The best way to build a following is to keep readers happy!

Yep. I definitely need another chapter of this saga. Well done. 5*

Good first story!

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Great first effort! Looking forward to the next chapter and more tales. 5*

Keep writing!

looking forward to more chapters. loved it

Excellent story really enjoyed reading it can’t wait for the following chapters, so erotic, love it!

This is awesome cannot wait for other installments !!! Thank you..

Excellent story. Having the wife totally go berzerk after hearing from her husband what had happened was hot as hell. Loved it. Love when women lose their inhibitions and lose their minds during sex, saying the most foul, filthy things that they'd never utter in public.

Great effort. 5 stars from me.

Awesome story! Thanks Looking forward to the next story . It will be interesting to see how the threesome turns . Hot I’m sure it will be as hot as this one was.

Very nice, can't wait for chapter 2. 5/5