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ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 1 year ago

It would have been a lot better if you had dialed back the lust and added more love and romance. Just saying that they both wanted to fuck again after she comes back to town isn’t love. It's not really anything more than fuck buddies, which isn't a relationship either. So disappointing. 😞

DanDraperDanDraperover 1 year ago

Very sexy story. Thanks for sharing.

5-stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well written and very well depicted. A few editing glitches like " reseructed " and "straddling the it" could be cleaned up to avoid distraction in the middle of the action. Thanks for a fun story.

tralan69ertralan69er7 months ago

@ScottishTexan

RE: So disappointing. - The only thing I found disappointing was your comment.

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