All Comments on 'Off The Shoulder'

What a fun romp. Love your new characters and look forward to their next adventure. P

I noticed three super annoying (to me at least) typos in this. Two of which I could swear I had fixed. I’ll submit an edit, but that won’t get posted for some time. In the meantime, please accept my apologies. 😬 Em

@PeterKimi - thanks for your unstinting support and encouragement. Em

So unique. You have such a creative, dirty mind

@lc69hunter - thanks, hun. 🩷🩷🩷. Em

So if I make a bad decision does that mean my ego and id are giving each other a reach-around?

Well done as always Em. And this really was all you. All I really did was suggest a few possible directions.

@Djmac1031 - it meant a lot to have you along for the ride 😊. Em

I’ll admit I did not expect the turn this story took, it was incredibly hot and I’m looking forward to reading more of Lily and Emma’s adventures. And I have your other work to read while I wait! Thank you

Not enough of the two sides of you (so transparent by the way) getting it on. I hope for more lesbian hotness in future stories. But amusing nevertheless. A

@Drewrowan - that super kind of you to say. Thank you 😊. Em

@PrettyAmelia - lots of lesbian stuff in Caputpedes when it publishes (May 25), but you may not enjoy one of the characters 😬. Still half written your Fall visit from last year. Have to get back yo it. Em

Semen to the rescue!

@djrip - semen is always the answer 😬. Em

That was really fun and very hot as usual. Nicely done!

@NoTalentHack - thanks, hun. Means a lot 😊. Em

Exceptionally well written and an interesting concept.

@A_Gentle_Mann - thanks, hun 😊. Em

Awesome!

@stockingnut - thanks, hun. 😊. Em

This was quite a surprise and a fun story. I haven't read anything close to this on Lit.com. Thanks for sharing. RT

@RoperTrace - thanks for saying 😊. Em

Loved it, as expected, and can’t wait for the continuance 😈…

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@steelybkue73 - thanks, hun. Just have to write chapters 8 and 9 (chapter 10 is a short, tie up loose ends kinda thing). Em

Enchanting...the charybdis of this series is pulling me in. There's no escape.

@Mastered_again - very sweet of you to say 😊

I took your advice and just finished reading this before Heaven and Hole. I'm a bit of an innocent when it comes to Science Fiction, so I appreciated how gentle an introduction to it this was. Also, I'm a slow reader which may explain why I'm intimidated by the length of Heaven and Hole. This story was a good length. Like your boyfriend, I've never picked up a prostitute in a hotel bar, let alone two. Good story; 5* from me. ~~JB Edwards

@JBEdwards - thank you for the kind comment. H&H has 12 chapters, so you can read one, or maybe two, at a time. Em

Emily I usually don't have a penchant for sci-fi; however you write very well. How you wrote your dialogue is excellent. My favorite phrasing is how you described the decaying of a marriage, 'a slow accumulation of scar tissue' is a wonderful phrase that many of us long time married folks can easily relate too. And it is exactly how many relationships decay, slowly & unnoticed until there is no tissue left to treat & bandage.

Off the shoulder is also an enjoyable & erotic read. As I read I was in the room with Andy, Emma & Lily watching what was happening & getting as excited as Andy was. I wish I could give you more than 5 stars. You deserve it.

Enjoy your sabbatical & thanks for the entertaining story.

@Slidercurve - thank you for the lovely feedback. 😊. Em

5 big blazing Stars for the writer of this fun little fantasy. No Harm No Foul, just fun, fun fun. thks, Buster2U

@Buster2U - thank you. One of my most fun stories to write 😊 Em

What a great idea and so well written. I love Emma and Lily. So much to like... looking forward to the next chapter.

@ShelbyDawn57 - thank you. I love the pair of them too 😊 Em