All Comments on 'Office Politics Ch. 06'

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cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 1 year ago

Obsessive, creepy, two dimensional...I like Gabriel less each chapter. I keep waiting for him to show interest in her as a person and to stop treating her as a living blow up doll. And she is acting like a doormat. Only the tiniest attempts to hold onto her morals or to set boundaries. I'm glad you're back and want to see how this story ends, but it needs some character development soon to become a real story and not an extended porn intro script.

karalinekaralineabout 1 year agoAuthor

I'm glad he's coming across as a real dick @catfightfate, that's the look i was going for. Jess is about to grow a bit of a backbone. Hopefully enough of one for you1

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18/1/22 Small update, i have asked for the enslavement of Briseis to be taken down now, this should be happening in the next few days, so i suggest you don't start reading, unless you're prepared to read the thing all in one sitting! Thanks again for all your lovely comments....

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