All Comments on 'Office Quickie'

Hot. Weird, but hot.

-- KVK

A spite fuck is good. I should describe what I'd like to do to Kathy Lee...:)

Quick and to the point. And I enjoyed the hatred in it, very well done. Thank you

Is there a way to rate it 5+??

In this short story, I could feel the heat of the unbridled lust these two had for each other mixed with their hatred and loathing. Interesting thing about hate, though--it is very closely related to love. The opposite of love is actually indifference. Very sexy story.

Great story, fast and furious!

Sam.

Brevity is no impedance to a skilled, perceptive writer like Sunny. Fresh, poignant phrases like "poisoned lips," "gouged out my soul," "pulled the kiss in deeper," and "our eyes locked" suggests keen observation (or imagination) and skills required to render them. Like all good literature, the piece raises issues wisely left for the reader's ponderment. Thought-provoking erotica is rare, and a delight to find. -DaJerryGuy(at)aol(dot)com

The opening line and the repeated phrase. We've all been there and you captured it perfectly.

In the wrong hands it can do a lot of damage. Very powerful piece.

The perfect erotic short story.

Utterly beautiful.

I really love this story, you should write a longer version or maybe a sequel. This is so good but it's so short it's like a tease.